导致作文5.5分的5种最常见的句子结构问题

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  • 假设你写一个简单的独立的句子 people play sport。 然后下面的句子结构都是错的。这些句子一出现,你的分数很有可能就是5.5分。

    1、独立的句子不能充当主语

    例:people play sport is healthy.

    修改:people can stay healthy, if they play sport.

    2、独立的句子不能放在介词后面

    例:the proportion of people play sport increased.

    修改:the proportion of people who play sport increased.

    3、独立的句子不能放在there be后面

    例: there are many people play sport in this city.

    修改:there are many people who play sport in this city.

    4、独立的句子不能和另外一个独立的句子用副词相连

    例:People play sport, thus, they can stay healthy.

    修改1(逗号改成;或者.):People play sport; thus, they can stay healthy.

    修改2(副词改成连词):People play sport, so they can stay healthy.

    5、独立的句子不能和一个从属连词(although, while, when等)单独成句

    例:People can stay healthy. Because people play sport.

    修改:People can stay healthy, because people play sport.